Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Autumn Leaves



Leaves are falling in my hair as I walk   




I hear leaves crunching.





Wind is blowing in my hair  
My hair Is so soft.





I can hear children laughing
from jumping in leaves .





At the end of autumn
I see leaves crumbling on the ground.                           

                                                           by Jacob     

8 comments:

  1. Awesome words in your poem, Jacob!

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  2. Awesome Fotobabble and poem Jacob. What is your favourite part of your poem? Did you find anything hard about using Fotobabble?

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  3. Awesome poem Jacob
    Especially because you put a fotobabble with it
    From Brody.

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  4. I like your poem Jacob. Its really cool how you used Fotobabble. How long did it take you to make your poem?

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  5. Amazing Jacob
    I really like your Fotobabble and you peom how long did it take you to write your peom

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  6. "OK Jacob, your Fotobabble back round looks cool".

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  7. wow man awesome as writing.

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  8. cool peom . relly awesome.keep up the good work.
    from regan.

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